Last night, Desperation broke it's single day hit record. The previous record was 408 hits in a single day. Yesterday, we broke the 500 mark. Desperation had 528 hits in a single day and 161 new visitors, which is another record.
This is fabulous. I love it and I'm not complaining at all, but if people love this story, WHY ARE THEY NOT REVIEWING MORE? LOL! UGH! I love getting the notifications that people love my story enough to add it and me as an author to their alerts and favorites, but I'd love to know what the readers think of each chapter. I'd love to hit double digits for a single chapter when it comes to reviews.
SO, IF YOU ARE READING PLEASE I BEG OF YOU, LEAVE ME SOME LOVE!!!
Tuesday, April 28, 2009
Breaking the barrier
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Labels: Bella, Desperation, fanfiction, Jasper, reviews, Twilight, writing
Monday, April 27, 2009
Chapter 12~2 steps forward; 1 step back
I'm so sorry for my continued evilness. It won't be much longer I promise. Jasper is just determined to make this perfect for Bella and completely different than anything he's done in the past. I'm just glad that someone walked in, I do believe he'd been quite upset with himself.
The song in this chapter that Jasper sings to Bella is Angels by Robin Thicke
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Saturday, April 25, 2009
Chapter 11~Completely Fucked Up
The songs in this chapter are
Gunpowder and Lead by Miranda Lambert
Mean Girls by Sugarland
I'm Only Me When I'm with You by Taylor Swift.
I hope you enjoyed the chapter as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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Thursday, April 23, 2009
Loving Lady Muse
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Chapter 10~Good Vibrations
The response was once again amazing and completely inspiring to me. Which means that Chapter 11 is already well underway. If all goes well it will be posted late tonight or early in the morning.
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Friday, April 17, 2009
Story Rec, Be My Biggest Fan by Crash Hale.
I came across this one shot this morning and I DEMAND that you stop what you are doing and read it NOW!!
Be My Biggest Fan is a one shot by Crash Hale.
This one shot was inspired by the song 'One Night Stand' by 'Hinder'. Jasper shows Bella what she's been missing while they are both in Texas for their own reasons. All Human. Jasper POV. Warning: It's all one huge LEMON.
Let me tell you, Jasper fans out there, THIS ONE IS HOT!! Like Supernova HOT!!
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Labels: Bella, fanfiction, Jasper, Sex, Twilight
Wednesday, April 15, 2009
Tuesday, April 14, 2009
Desperation Blinkie
Thanks Katie aka starfish422! Katie is the author of the fabulous Edward and Jasper Story entitled Over the Top! I love it. Beware graphic guy on guy sex, but it's a great story!
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Holy Cannoli!!
I always check right before and right after posting and today I had 7 hits. Now 2.5 hours later I have 167 hits! 160 hits in 2.5 hours, OMFG!! I'm ecstatic.
Until today the record was a 132 hits and 47 visitors. The 160 has not only blown the hits record to bits, but now we've blown the visitors record away with 56 visitors today.
I love you all!! Thank you so much for reading my story. Now, if only I could get you to review it more.
BTW, if it was recommended to you by someone let me know. I'd like to thank them.
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Chapter 9~Mean Girls
The chapter is named after the song Mean Girls by Sugarland. High school girls are mean, but can you imagine how mean it would get if they were fighting over him?

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Chapter 9 is finished
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Chapter 9 troubles
Parts of it feel like I've skipped over stuff I shouldn't have and parts feel like I'm droning on.
I had hoped that I would be able to publish Chapter 9 tonight, but I'm not too hopeful.
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Chapter 4~Misunderstandings and Misconceptions
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Chapter 3~Hey Jasper
This chapter was really fun to write. I'm a musician or famous so for me, it was definitely a step out of the box.
The songs in this chapter are...
Kerosene by Miranda Lambert
A Place in this World by Taylor Swift
Hey Stephen by Taylor Swift
Now I know that 3 songs a concert does not make, but I'm only listing the one's I mention in the chapter.
There will be many more songs to go along with upcoming chapter
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Chapter 2~Showtime
Not quite lemony, but definitely a bit tangy. Below are pictures of the characters and the outfits I've designed for them. I use the Polyvore site to do my Desperation collection.
Bella
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Chapter 1~I'm in Trouble
In this chapter Bella Swan meets her new siblings, twins Emmett and Alice McCarty, and their friends Edward & Rosalie. Rose's brother Jasper shows up and blows Bella away. He's hot and he's got her hot and bothered.
Playlist
One Blue Sky by Sugarland
I Wanna Die by Miranda Lambert
Kerosene by Miranda Lambert
Desperation by Miranda Lambert
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